A ring Of fire
blazes the wood,
A ray of hope
And victory of the Good..!
When sensitivities go blunt
And there's no Humanity..!
Relationships are burnt
And strangers all over the city..
When Corruption prevails
And crime is rampant..
A tiny Spark
Is what all we want...!!
The Victim, the Oppressed
The squeezed, dry bark..
Will hit back to wipe out
Empire of the Dark......!!
A spark it (the bark) takes
To destroy the WOOD...
And bring back the Greenery
As and where it Stood......!!!!!:):):):)
A ring of fire blazes the wood................
This poem should fill anyone with immense hope in whatever hopeless or helpless situation. The words and the sequence of ideas carry the intensity and the theme of the poem very well. The way the lines have been expressed, makes the reader to visualize the effect and rather too well. Ultimate piece! :) You should write more..
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ReplyDeleteThanks...Hope I may add some recent stuff
nice work dear.. amazing..
ReplyDeleteNice.. keep up the good work.. :)
ReplyDeleteAwesomely awesome! That's what I can say and I must Say!
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